Wtf Poem by Linda A

Wtf

Rating: 4.3


It feels like times stopped since that moment
Like I haven't been alive since then
Memories are all I know
What is presently happening
Isn't real to me
I'm just acting like I exist
But the truth is I died
The day u left with
All my love and my pride
I should be dehydrated
Cause all I do is cry
My time I spend in tears
Is more than the time i spend drinkin water
I relive my fears
and then relive them again
look at me now
and you would recognize a thing
here i am though I don't know how
i got stuck in this nightmare, this dream
I dont feel like a human being
but people expect me to act like one
but im sick of acting
and now i'm done

Friday, June 19, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: sadness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 09 May 2020

A sad story. A pained expression of abandonement, hopelessness. I didn't like the title of the poem. You may like to consider one of the followings, or some other: Pained Silent Teardrops Unseen Teardrops Sick of Acting

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Roseann Shawiak 27 June 2015

A tender, heart wrenching poem, it has touched my heart with your sadness. A very intense and emotional picture of a love that has done wrong to a person's spirit and essence. You have painted a very vivid picture of your pain. Thank you for sharing this poem, RoseAnn

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Nathan Coppedge 19 June 2015

Nice poem. You're one of my favorites.

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Linda A 19 June 2015

thank you :)

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