Wrong Thought Process Poem by Emma Connor

Wrong Thought Process



My eyes have been opened its poison that I see,
These ego driven people, so emotional free.

Living in a bubble, in a zombie like state,
With a padlocked soul and a heart full of hate.

They're motivated by money, and craving attention,
searching for their next hit and striving for perfection.

They have no inner peace, just thoughts about war,
feeding their burning rage, but what for.

They'll never see the beauty of the rising of the sun,
they only see the need for their weapons, knives and guns.

They'll never understand how cruel they have become,
for their mind, body and soul have all become so numb.

Their thoughts are so ugly they spit acid when they speak,
there hostile voice, shouting down at the weak.

They look at domination as a sign of their own progress,
never realising they have the wrong thought process.

Sunday, November 23, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: war
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote how I feel about the state of the world at the moment, I would like more people to open their eyes and see what it has become. This world is a beautiful creation and is being destroyed by our own hands.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 24 November 2014

Thanks for this poem, Emma, which is very relevant for our world's present situation. There is much destruction in environment and in the lives of people through the wars and weapons the powerful have created and the zombies have used.

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Savita Tyagi 23 November 2014

We all share the same concern and we need to voice it.

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Savita Tyagi 23 November 2014

Excellent poem. So clear and precise in thoughts.My best wishes for you. Thanks for your comment on my recent poem.

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