Sergio Jaime

Rookie - 181 Points (23/05/1987)

Woven Together


You say I'm just a silent whisper,
far away steps in a dark valley,
an empty gaze to the space,
and still you see me standing here,
am I waiting or walking away?

You hear a permanent sound in the distance
and feel an emotion taking your breath,
precise metronome giving you the way,
my heart is beating, could you reach it from there?
A strong wind, I'm facing the gales
I am here, are you there?
Steps in the distance,
I now know for sure,
woven together,
are my dreams and yours.

Submitted: Wednesday, February 22, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, February 22, 2012

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