Would You Mind? Poem by Sandra Osborne

Would You Mind?

Rating: 3.5


Would you mind
If I used your world
To crush all the laughter,
To feel the angels cry,
To watch the flowers wilt,
Upon a dry planet?

Would you mind
If I used your words
To describe the darkness,
To harbor the hate,
To watch the rulers die,
Upon a dead planet?

Would you mind
If I used your thoughts
To think all the lies,
To amaze all the people,
To watch the heavens fade,
Upon a dark planet?

Would you mind
If I used your dreams
To heal all the world,
To transform the future,
To watch the greed die,
Upon a golden planet?

Would You Mind?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
dissatified exmember 16 February 2005

Well done again my friend. Hugs Jan

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Rich Hanson 03 February 2005

I enjoyed this one very much. Well crafted and flows well, and a nice original perspective to it.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 03 February 2005

Sandra, I bet this was inspired by a strong cup of green tea....... Very original H

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Theodora Onken 03 February 2005

Sandra, this one is golden! Theodora Onken

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