Worshiping The Love Poem by amir mohammad islami chalandar

Worshiping The Love

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the old man named love was a cragsman and mountaineered

the mountain of life baleful and hard

dishonesty and treason were like two rabid dogs

he had against no adjuvant and guard

the world and fate were so sorry

they faked and showed him a red card

he fought versus them intrepidly and contriverly

but was harshly damaged and scarred

abnegation was his worshiper among this war

between people he was acclaimed and starred

he never shows ennui and never disoblige

and is a great smoochy and the night silence bard

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Library @ Debadarshi 13 September 2014

What a metaphor! ! ! Really, an enjoyable read.... do write more and more.... You are going to shine, carve a niche for yourself..... Well done brother....

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Tribhawan Kaul 08 September 2014

A very nice poem personifying love.

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Chuy Amante 27 June 2014

Wow, that came from a high place~ thanks

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Heather Wilkins 25 June 2014

nice love poem well written about the old man called love

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Nice tribute to love with reverent and solemn words.............Amir.........an excellent write..............

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