World Of Greed Poem by Dave Alan Walker

World Of Greed

Rating: 4.3


Subliminal messages
in a world of greed
They start you young
To sow the seed

To get you to agree
to what the powers that be
want you to be

They'll even take your country
if they feel the need
will we ever be truly free
in a world of greed

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Cockrell 30 December 2011

greed and apathy, the two diseases that would destroy humanity!

1 1 Reply
lottie Harris 30 December 2011

i like it, it makes sense which ithink is kinda rare :)

1 0 Reply
Vipins Puthooran 30 December 2011

Root out the seeds of greed/ a good poem! !

1 0 Reply
Glenn Gay 30 December 2011

I like your poetry I particularly like World of greed, I think it describes today's world perfectly.

1 0 Reply
Nkosilathi Zinyane 30 September 2019

very strong poem...very enjoyable

1 0 Reply
Scott Federman 22 October 2016

Short and to the point.

1 2 Reply
Heather Wilkins 07 August 2013

this is a great question and I feel the answer is no. a good read

2 1 Reply
Johnathan Juarez 16 May 2012

you ask great questions in your poetry

1 2 Reply
Lawrence H 13 January 2012

Wow, wow, Dave Walker, Very well structure, easy to read and very short-lined poem. Just how truth is the world full of greedy people... Therefore, we have many wars, country boundary, patriotism spirit to split and destroy human race. I think we should go back to the basic especially religion teaching and some Buddhism Karma practice to avoid greed and selfish. I rated this poem 10/10..Well Done, Dave....

1 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success