)))))))))))))) World Lost Into Crowd ((((((((((((((( Poem by Dr subhendu kar

)))))))))))))) World Lost Into Crowd (((((((((((((((

Rating: 2.7


Oh dear friend wait a bit onto the dusk
Life has never forsaken your dream
sun stoops over heads bristling warmth
earth is least hurried high by your desire

passage plexus waits as long as you wish
time never debars you to sprinkle your beams
fact is the reality as truth embraces the hope
passion is never be enticed upon by clouds

rain descends by crooning of clouds dark
heart yet betides by the slake of the tunes
as beauty of love makes me apart by the blow
did I not follow you until moon comes?

i do remember amber glow by novels of night
as speckles of whisper wakes me up again
I look through window asking for the love
where is world lost into crowd of unknowns

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
C T Heart 12 October 2008

heart yet betides by the slake of the tunes as beauty of love makes me apart by the blow --- Lovely lines, i loved them so much for it is such a beautiful piece to share forth...a 10.

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Thad Wilk 12 October 2008

A sad poem, written masterfully! Thank you for sharing Dr Kar! *10*! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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Thomas Kurkoski 15 October 2008

An absolutely brilliant piece full of truth and emotion. It doesn't get much better than that! Cheers, Thomas K

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very well put great poem

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Seema Chowdhury 27 October 2008

such a lovely composition, full of desires and hopes. very inspiring wordings. i hope you will find what you are looking for. take care

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Miriam Maia Padua 26 October 2008

oh, what a piece.! such an inspiration for anybody to be patient in in acquiring their dreams. It touches me a lot...your piece is very meaningful to me...enough to bring down tears down my cheeks but with a smile...it will definitely serve as an inspiration to anybody....who dreams of fulfillment in life...a 10+ for this very beautiful and inspiring piece. God bless you...always

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Anjali Sinha 25 October 2008

hey Shub, really a lovely piece -we are a lost world into that crowd of doubts and hates +++++++++10 and A+++ dear fren, regards anju

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 20 October 2008

LOTS OF TRUTHFUL EMOTIONS THERE... A REALLY NICE PIECE...

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Dr subhendu kar

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Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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