World Poem by Hannah Montana

World

Rating: 3.7


Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
I hate the world,
I'm sure you do, too.

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
Nobody's perfect,
So what can I do?

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
It depends on us all
To make the world new.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 14 November 2008

profound..........well done

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Annie Girl 07 October 2008

nice poem keep up the great work :)

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Greenwolfe 1962 30 September 2008

HeHeHeHeHeHe! I gave this a 6 with no recommendation. I'm sure that insults play well with audiences! I'll suggest an alternative. In the meantime, I like the fact that you write in rhyme, just like me. It means you will never be far from success in poetry, it just takes time. GW62

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Ian Singer 25 September 2008

i liked it you sound pretty cool

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