Working Bee Poem by devon da poet

Working Bee

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Babe you're a queen and I'm a working bee
I'll protect your hive if you let us be
Babe we are green; you need my company
I'll make you my wife if you let us be
You sound so much alone when we spoke on the phone
I need you close to me; can I be your drone?
There's no need for money when there's good honey
Fresh from the flowers; made it just for you
Ain't got super powers but what I got is true
I got love and it's buzzing in the air
You'll get what you deserve from your toes up to your hair
Babes my love can only sting you once
But my feeling lasts forever; the feeling of romance
I'll swarm you with my body
Around my arms you'll never feel lonely
The way you turn and twist and fly around me with your beauty
Put a working bee in duty
Babe you the queen, give me the authority
Every queen needs a king for maturity
…. Your working bee!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 26 June 2017

four years later and i'm about to put this into my/our July 2017's 'showcase for and by PH poets'. it is a monthly display i put together of poems i've liked on PH, mostly written by PH friends and found in MyPoemList. this month i'm featuring poems by male poets, except one female i left out inadvertently in June, when i was using poems by females. any questions? just ask. all poets get recognized as the authors of the poems i use and, this month for the first time, i now direct readers to go to the poem's PH link. so maybe some new readers will come your way. bri :) thanks p.s. NOW you can edit the response you made to my first comment. do you have a spare apostrophe you could use? ha ha.

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Devon P. John 27 July 2013

thanks... its edited

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Bri Edwards 03 July 2013

wow! another truly grabbing poem. i like the use of bee-things to tell your story of love. i'll put this in my poemlist and you in my poetlist. have you tried to set this to music; i read you are a musician. my only suggestion is checking the spelling of......swam (sic) , which i believe you mean to be swarm. thanks for sharing.

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