Words Written With Tainted Tears Poem by Raven Mcgovern

Words Written With Tainted Tears

Rating: 5.0


Your words are written on my face with mascara-tainted tears
You ripped out my pandoras box
Leaving with my hope
You are much like the young jabberwocky
Foolish and made up of only lies and only pretend
For your love was foolish pretend and only a lie
You said you loved me like the Great Gatsby loved Daisy
But you played Daisy an left with someone else
Leaving me Gatsby in the end; dead.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John DeBona 05 May 2011

I like poems, with twists and references...good job

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 03 May 2011

Great poem with a lot of wisdom. Wonderfully written. Great imagery. Fine poetics. A big...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2

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