Words Of A Broken Heart Poem by Justice For All

Words Of A Broken Heart

Rating: 4.3


The guy:
No more lovers no more lies and covers
I will not accept any letter
My heart used to suffer
I see love is just a toy
Play with it then throw it away
And surely you will say
I can feel my heart when i pray
All the doors to my heart had been locked
All the roads to happiness had been blocked
Everything is just a lie
No one can look me in the eye
No one can tell me why
I am saying to my soul good bye
So please god let me die
I see darkness in my day
I feel sadness in every way
The girl:
Don't let your sadness talk
To the darkness don't let it walk
Perhaps some one will care
With your heart will be fair
don't sit and wait
Don't say i feel great
Because you will be late
For the train of your fate.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynda Robson 14 March 2009

Good write, broken hearts can be mended and new love will come one day, 10 Lynda xx

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Ramesh T A 15 March 2009

It means turn a new leaf in life I feel. It is good. It touched upon new height in love and your poem is also good in narrating this message!

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Rajaram Ramachandran 15 March 2009

The two poems reflect your negative moods. Perhaps you will do write poems showing your positive moods for our reading pleasure.

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Jo E 15 March 2009

I like it! its writen well sad but good... you have great talent! keep on writing

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Ershad Mazumder 15 March 2009

Arab poets are really true poets. Thank you very much for sharing this piece with us.

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a sad poem for a despairate moments..well done

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3wwad 52 12 April 2009

ur poems are romantic... no wonder girls like them. lol

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anne adam 08 April 2009

i love it it's so cool and nice poem you rock keep going

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Hakurasen Lee 26 March 2009

i love this one too! ur a machine! lol u didnt capitalize God though. that kinda bugs me. sorry hugs^-^

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Allan Macli Borges 23 March 2009

Very good work with well-placed rhymes and a message that's real in anywhere.10. allan macli

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