Words Build Bridges Poem by C. P. Sharma

Words Build Bridges

Rating: 4.6


The mind itself can’t enjoy alone
Clamors to share it with others
Words build the bridges over souls
Paper birds with the message cajole

Eternity, through our minds’ prism,
Reflects into Nature its myriad hues
The sunset offsets its glamour glare
From heart the beautiful poetry flows.

Though the paper birds now fly bit slow
Messages are soothing as flakes of snow

*Inspired by Ms. Sandra Fowler’s poem ‘Paper Birds’.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh T A 03 October 2009

Yes, one cannot get satisfaction alone unless one shares what one has with others. Poetry, paper bird and snow flakes of messages are good images! Solution for the problem is answered in my poem, A Get Together and hope it will be interesting to you and all readers, I believe!

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Carol Gall 03 October 2009

words do build bridges great poem 10

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Meggie Gultiano 04 October 2009

Though the paper birds now fly bit slow Messages are soothing as flakes of snow ............................. Lovely verse..

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Ivor Hogg 04 October 2009

How true my friend we need others to validate our very existence. To share thoughts with likeminded people is a privilege

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Sandra Fowler 05 October 2009

I am privileged to know that 'Paper Birds' has inspired such a beautiful poem. Your last lines are exceptional. I wish I had written them. Take care. Always your friend at poemhunter, Sandra

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Deodath Debideen 18 October 2009

Atma is supreme! No bridges over it...only deception!

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 13 October 2009

a well composed and crafted piece of work

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Sonya Florentino 11 October 2009

I agree with Sandra F the last 2 lines are beautiful....and you're not the only one inspired by her beautiful poem....do read my own titled 'Paper Birds'

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Ken E Hall 11 October 2009

A poem certainly from the heart of a life of building bridges with words of wisdom and this poem has just that...soothing like a flake of snow++10 regards

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Rachel Butler 10 October 2009

Eternity, through our minds’ prism Rachel Ann Butler

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C. P. Sharma

C. P. Sharma

Bissau, Rajasthan
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