Unintelligible Susurration


Wondering Who You Love - Poem by Unintelligible Susurration

All this time
I've been wondering
Who you love
Because it is not me.

I had the courage
To finally
Approach you.

When I did
You laughed in my face
And said get lost.

I know now
You chase after
The wearer
Of leather and
Eerie white shades.

What if I
Were to suddenly
Mimic her?

I bet I would
Look foolish
In that same
Red dress.

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Comments about Wondering Who You Love by Unintelligible Susurration

  • Gold Star - 9,882 Points Heather Wilkins (6/5/2013 9:45:00 AM)

    a good write expressing yourself. stay the course. keep writing (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,742 Points Wahab Abdul (6/5/2013 12:33:00 AM)

    very emotional and heart felt... enjoyed it... keep it up (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 5, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 5, 2013


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