Wonder, The World Seems Wonder, Poem by Raghavendra Nayak
Wonder, The World Seems Wonder,
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Wonder, it’s so cool at noon,
Wonder, it’s so hot at midnight…sss
Yeah, wonder, the world seems wonder…sss…ssss…sssss
I wonder why the world is around the sun,
I wonder why the earth is around the sun,
I wonder why the moon is around the earth,
I wonder why the heart around thee,
I wonder not, I love thee a lot.
You may wonder when thunder roar,
You may wonder when light shines across the world,
You may wonder when I pray for thee,
You may wonder when stars shut down,
You may not wonder when thy shines like stars.
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4/16/2024 1:06:12 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Poem contains a good idea, however, there is too much repetition and it detracts from the quality and rhythm of the poem. I do like it except for that. Maybe if you consolidate some of the words it will have better rhythm to it. Example: Wonder, it's so cool at noon and so hot at midnight. Yes, wonder, the world seems so full of wonder. Or something along that line with your own words. Please keep writing every day, it will start to flow naturally. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn