Midnights Voice

Veteran Poet - 1,150 Points (November 3,1950 / Selma, Alabama)

Wonder Poem


She was a rockhard
Firm chassied, sleek
Chic, two toned
Wonder of a poem

Her smile could
turn you on a dime
Make you feel that
You've been left undone

She had a way
with her words
That made me
smile now in my tears

Her rear end
Never shimmied
Her trunk never
left undone

Her steering wheel
Was a half 'C'
And made up a
perfect curve

Her wheels were firmly
planted and
she never missed
the curves

Her dual exhausts
Made all in chrome
Under pressure
made her growl

Her six speed
Powertrain now
was made to
make you squeal

She could throw
you back into you seat
On takeoff
Oh, now with such a force

She knew of
Only one thing
And that was how
She was going to lead

Her glass was
Crystaline clear
Everything inside
You could see my dear

One word you
Never saw
And that word now
Was to 'hide'

Yes when it came it came
To performance
She came out
Dressed to kill

That's now my
Wonder poem
And it's time I
Give her all the gas

Submitted: Monday, August 20, 2012

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,059 Points Kanav Justa (5/20/2013 7:45:00 AM)

    wonder poem, , , , , a wonderful poem, , , , keep up... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 212 Points Dee Corpolongo (9/10/2012 12:25:00 PM)

    Great poem with vivid descriptions taken two ways!
    Like my way or highway! or love of both! revs up.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,508 Points * Sunprincess * (8/31/2012 12:54:00 PM)

    Omg! I think I love you... :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,307 Points Valsa George (8/25/2012 8:58:00 AM)

    Indeed a great poem! ! Without bumps and jolts, it glides and speeds in great ease! ! Well done! Kudos! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Heather Wilson (8/22/2012 3:27:00 PM)

    Great poem, brilliant description, such fun also. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (8/22/2012 6:41:00 AM)

    absolutely phenomenal so fun to read, every word tells a new meaning, brilliant just very brilliant
    thank you for sharing,
    payal (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,075 Points Unwritten Soul (8/22/2012 3:19:00 AM)

    When a truck master writes, he write from heart especially when it linked to grrrrrooommmm hahahaha...nice idea Thomas, is it a voice at midnight? no no no not grrr grooommm but zzzzzzzzzz hahaha joking_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 182 Points Karen Sinclair (8/21/2012 4:21:00 PM)

    Great title could only be written by one mused to the max... this made me smile with its quirky humour and i once adored a very old car of mine i named Sunny Delight as she was a dream and took me to all the best places (eventually) all of my friends and especially the kids at the school i worked at said she was exceptional, there really wasnt another one like her lol and every day she made me smile when i went to get in her.... so i so get this write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,268 Points Neela Nath (8/21/2012 8:27:00 AM)

    Wow! So pictorial description! Loved this piece too. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,685 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (8/20/2012 10:25:00 PM)

    Description of a car that can take you to the dream world! Nice! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,082 Points Valerie Dohren (8/20/2012 1:31:00 PM)

    Sounds like some car - poetry in motion you could say! ! Good write. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,112 Points Diane Hine (8/20/2012 7:20:00 AM)

    An enjoyable and entertaining poem! even for someone like me who has never been very interested in cars. (Report) Reply

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