Women*** What Can I Say Poem by louis rams

Women*** What Can I Say

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women-what can i say about them!
there is so much to say that it can't be written in a day.

they are the foundation of this earth
giving everything in life some worth.
they are the soul and inspiration of all men.
it is very rare that we will admit that we are wrong
but! we'll agree-just so we can get along.

in all relationships we must learn to live together.
so things will start to get better.
but to hear a woman it is one sided
'and we have to buy it'.

they know that without the female- life as we know it will cease to exist, and we will surely die.
this is the reason we continue to try.

they know that they are the ones who give birth
and as children we suckle their breasts so that
we can get stronger.
and when we are older we try to do the same if we can.
but they tend to slap our hand.

women will always argue with men
and the battle we lose in the end.
so if man wants to be loved and caressed
he has to keep his mouth shut.

'so her mouth could have a rest'.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather S 03 April 2009

great poem and oh so true

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Smiling. That is my first reaction. My favorite part of your poem through is the first two lines.

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Ha ha funny... This made me smile great piece of work Krista

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Linda Winchell 03 December 2008

Men don't keep their mouths shut! And they really don't get a chance to speak! God Write Sir Louis! And yes woman need to rest their mouths!

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