Woman's Skepticism Poem by louis rams

Woman's Skepticism

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love, desire, passion, fire, is all the qualities that you seek
for this is what will make you complete.

the man will normally have the passion and desire
while the woman has the love and the fire.
his desires could light a stack of timber
and leave your body totally limber.

it will grow so strong, that it turns into passion
and not caring about which feelings is in fashion.
he has to quench this irresistible urge
burning every part of his being
and this is all that he is seeing.

the fire spreads throughout his brain
leaving him totally insane.
he finally realizes that this ' must be love'.

and these feelings were all brought on by you
and to his heart, he must be true.

when you finally find a man who has all these qualities
you have become so skeptical
that these qualities you do not see.

open your eyes for i am here.
let me take away that fear.
my love has become embedded so deep in my soul
that my heart it did take hold.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 October 2009

the man will normally have the passion and desire while the woman has the love and the fire. his desires could light a stack of timber and leave your body totally limber....quite naural in human and to be observed strictly with moral code..beautifully done with forceful presentation...10 read mine......small desire...come home...no separate ways...

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Kranthi Pothineni 23 August 2009

Friend love is something which happens without our knowledge and grows too in same way. All we have to do is to take all whatever is gives with a smile.

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Shashendra Amalshan 23 August 2009

That is the hardest thing ever, to realize what is love! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I mean every one ask these kinda questions.. Am I really in love? ? ? Is this love? ? am I in love with that person? ? / I do ask my self those questions, and end up being confused.. this again a good one, thanks for explaining it all to me my dear sir! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! cheers shan

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Deborah Cromer 22 August 2009

Very nice! This is beautiful and honest. This poem speaks of a sincere, deep feeling of passion and connection. Nicely formed into an enjoyable read! DC

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