Woman's Lips Poem by Marieta Maglas

Woman's Lips

Rating: 5.0


Women's lips are still red, when
they are hidden in the darkness.In
the light of love, they
are metamorphosed
Into a kiss- an oval-where
the words are hidden
behind the thrills.There is
a special entwining, where
everything inside is deified.In
this surrealistic reality, this
new temple of The Lord
dances its red lights
for life and love.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ramesh Rai 23 July 2012

Really after reading your poem my heart has started dancing. not less than your invisible kiss and i m also thinking to compose a poem with title ' flying kiss' but dont worry it will be for my all well wishers. You do compose full of love, romance and tranquility. may god bless you and keep it up. top marks.

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Vipins Puthooran 23 July 2012

I can say that Kiss is like the four petals of a rose when we become one in love! ! ! ! Beautiful poem! ! ! ! 10

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Prasanna Kumari 23 July 2012

your poems transcend the reader to another level of understanding transforming the ordinary into extra ordinary...

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Ramesh T A 15 July 2012

Life of love with the kiss of red lips of a woman is heaven in the night for the worn out soul looking for peace....!

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Aranthabailu Ummar 20 July 2012

hei, you makes me go back.2 month back I had a love. The red lip is erased my soul now it is empty I have to wait another 2 years for it. When I touch it explores all that i cannot explain

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Charles Jagongo Ogola 01 August 2012

Great choice of words. I like this poem.

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Eric Cockrell 26 July 2012

a woman's lips are the entrance to the temple!

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Tasadduq Hussain, Ejaz 26 July 2012

Beautiful poem. I like new temple of The Lord dances its red lights for life and love. When the Red gate is closed, imagine how many deep thoughts are resting behind in there.

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Rajendran Muthiah 24 July 2012

In the new temple of God that is Women's lips, words are hidden behind the thrills of kissing.Everything inside the lips or kiss is deified.Pleasure romantic overflows.Exhilarates!

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Ramesh Rai 23 July 2012

Really after reading your poem my heart has started dancing. not less than your invisible kiss and i m also thinking to compose a poem with title ' flying kiss' but dont worry it will be for my all well wishers. You do compose full of love, romance and tranquility. may god bless you and keep it up. top marks.

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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