Woman Poem by Preetam Shetty

Woman

Rating: 5.0


Freshness of shower
Fragrance of flower
Music of river
Warmth to prevent shiver
Strength of earth
Essence of birth
Immortality of time
Poetry with a rhyme
Universal shine
Power to refine
Strength to fight
Symbol of might
Taste of affection
World of perfection
Sea of emotion
Meaning of devotion
Feel of serenity
Face of divinity

Art to decoy
Ability to destroy
Venomous skill
Silent kill
Razor’s strap
Unsolvable trap
Ferocious flame
Dangerous game
Motives malign
Addiction of wine
Unsolvable puzzle
Signs of trouble
Anger of lord
Thirst of a sword
Temptation to lure
Poison without a cure
Smirk with a shy
Unholy cry

Ingredients of a composition
Together which we call a “WOMAN”

(This poem is written in a context that if a woman wants she can make but at times she can also break)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kieran J96 03 June 2010

this is a really good poem and it reads clearly and gets the message across i really like

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Elias Barcelona 03 June 2010

Perfect really i couldnt have said it better myself 10/10

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A brilliant write! This describes just how complexed a woman can be. The latter of the poem has the emphasis of a woman scorned! well done, : D

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Merna Ibrahim 03 June 2010

Although, I am girl.I have to confess that you are really true and totally right! ! A poem written perfectly :) ! 10

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Bianca Isabela 03 June 2010

Beautifully said! Cheers!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 17 July 2010

Light and Shade on women…well it is good one…but darks have been overturned by the lights… congrats for sharing Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 PS In MPL clicked n

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 June 2010

you keep the rhythm and the rhyming ending of the sentences.. it is really very m uch priseworthy. you comment and praise the virtues of women. World of perfection Sea of emotion Meaning of devotion Feel of serenity Face of divinity. Therare poets who are realistic and poets who are not realistic. may experience of life make you a wonderful poet. That is my great wish for you. thank you for sharing.

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Hans Vr 04 June 2010

Very well written. Exactly the right choice of words, melodiously joined together. I like the two extremes put against each other. You got so many praises of women in this comments section on this poem, called woman. Really a great write. In movies we tend to like to second one, but in our house the first. :)

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Christina Phan 04 June 2010

wow its was wonderul and nothing was wrong with this poem. as along u write with ur heart, its will sound amazing. 10+++

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Gita Ashok 04 June 2010

Oh my God, I am speechless. You have presented such a great analysis here. What impressed me the most are the lines: World of perfection Sea of emotion Meaning of devotion Feel of serenity Face of divinity and Motives malign Addiction of wine Unsolvable puzzle Signs of trouble Anger of lord Thirst of a sword Temptation to lure Well done.

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