Witness Poem by ritty patnaik

Witness

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in the length and breath
of silence,
i am the only witness
to my souls yearning
for your love.
your silence,
and my eloquence,
had one thing to say.
that we were poles apart.

yet your gestures of love,
my being in love
brought us close together.
before your presence
filled my heart,
now, in your heart,
i am subdued and smug
in your frozen thoughts
i am the loving soul!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ejaz Khan 26 December 2009

Wow! A poem that couldn't leave me untouched, a profound and deep poem, Ritty, thanks for sharing!

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Milica Franchi De Luri 25 December 2009

beautiful love poem...............10

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