Without You Poem by Sandra Feldman

Without You

Rating: 5.0


What am I without you?
Just a point in space,
A whisper, emotion,
Without a face.
What am I without you?
Just fallen grace,
A shadow that trembles,
An empty embrace,
That makes the World,
The Loneliest place.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 15 September 2013

You are always generous in complimenting, Ms. Feldman! Thank you.

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Sandra Feldman 15 September 2013

Dear Mr. Ahsan, What you wrote below is better than what I wrote above, Thanks, S.

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Khairul Ahsan 13 July 2013

In other words, may I say: The point in space becomes A big enigmatic circle, The whisper the sweetest delight, , The emotion the most intense urge, When you and me unite. The grace gets personified, The trembling shadow altogether disappears The embrace becomes divinely dignified, And permanently locked not in disguise, And the world an indestructible paradise!

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