Sandra Feldman


Without You - Poem by Sandra Feldman

What am I without you?
Just a point in space,
A whisper, emotion,
Without a face.
What am I without you?
Just fallen grace,
A shadow that trembles,
An empty embrace,
That makes the World,
The Loneliest place.


Comments about Without You by Sandra Feldman

  • Gold Star - 9,424 Points Khairul Ahsan (9/15/2013 4:08:00 AM)

    You are always generous in complimenting, Ms. Feldman!
    Thank you. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 21,143 Points Sandra Feldman (9/15/2013 3:54:00 AM)

    Dear Mr. Ahsan, What you wrote below is better than what I wrote above, Thanks, S. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,424 Points Khairul Ahsan (7/13/2013 6:09:00 AM)

    In other words, may I say:
    The point in space becomes
    A big enigmatic circle,
    The whisper the sweetest delight, ,
    The emotion the most intense urge,
    When you and me unite.
    The grace gets personified,
    The trembling shadow altogether disappears
    The embrace becomes divinely dignified,
    And permanently locked not in disguise,
    And the world an indestructible paradise! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 9, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, June 10, 2013


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