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Sandra Feldman


Without You


What am I without you?
Just a point in space,
A whisper, emotion,
Without a face.
What am I without you?
Just fallen grace,
A shadow that trembles,
An empty embrace,
That makes the World,
The Loneliest place.

Submitted: Sunday, June 09, 2013
Edited: Monday, June 10, 2013

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  • Veteran Poet - 3,909 Points Khairul Ahsan (7/13/2013 6:09:00 AM)

    In other words, may I say:
    The point in space becomes
    A big enigmatic circle,
    The whisper the sweetest delight, ,
    The emotion the most intense urge,
    When you and me unite.
    The grace gets personified,
    The trembling shadow altogether disappears
    The embrace becomes divinely dignified,
    And permanently locked not in disguise,
    And the world an indestructible paradise! (Report) Reply

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