Without Her Poem by Vikram G. Aarella

Nice poem! Yeah, I know how hard it feels to try to go on living without someone- it's hard but you have to achieve it. This poem kind of reminds me of 'Never Gonna Leave your side' by Daniel Bedinfield- you should listen to it; I think you'd really like it! Keep up the good work :)

It's so true.... hard to live without your love

I love this poem. i can totally relate to it

wow...love the connection u made with parasite n host example... preets

Interesting poem about total surrender, nice one Vicram! Best wishes, Aisha

Do true loves rest on of host-parasite relation? In poem we see such odds and that’s the beauty of this poem. Ten sr. sakti

this is well writen poem

Whoo, never thought a poem that good could come out of three lines, but you have done it! ~Amber~

PROFOUND IN IMPACT, YET SO FEW WORDS....A TRUE POETIC ACHIEVEMENT...HAVEN'T HEARD FROM YOU LATELY...HOPE ALL IS WELL...PS>GREAT CLOSE! '''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

I will survive with her support, Like a parasite in a host. What? Like a parasite in a host? It means that if she will support you, you will act like a parasite? Wikipedia said that 'A parasite is an organism that spends a significant portion of its life in or on the living tissue of a host organism and which causes harm to the host without immediately killing it..........' She is supporting you and you are planning to harm her? :) ; -) Just kidding! as you wanted me to read this poem. I read and it is a good one.