Aftab Alam

Gold Star - 35,197 Points (15 th April 1967 / , , RANCHI,)

Within the Dew


O my love, why sat beyond the edge?
Away from universe, away from the hedge
Come to me with thy courage-
I keepeth for thee, starry scarf
Earring of Sun and Moon
A garment made of mystery mist
Come to me with thy courage
With thy fragrance of musk
Waiting here up to dusk
Come, Come to me, before dark
Singing like a lark
Swimming like a shark
Come to me with soughing,
With heavenly hue, coloring.
Come, I’ll wipe thy tears
Here alone, I am melting.
Wanna to be an ocean;
Within the dew.

Submitted: Friday, June 21, 2013
Edited: Thursday, August 29, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 15,138 Points Valsa George (6/25/2013 12:19:00 AM)

    The longing to merge with the loved one is beautifully expressed through imagery drawn from Nature! There are some beautiful lines in the poem which I enjoyed much! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,565 Points Hazel Durham (6/22/2013 7:44:00 AM)

    Stunning write with beautiful and mesmerizing lines!
    Love this very inspired write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 936 Points Unwritten Soul (6/21/2013 11:15:00 PM)

    Wanna be ocean just by a dew
    I know because i wish it too
    As we know the pure love they do
    In droplet from above, symbolic for life being new
    A pure one, clean from any torture view...._SOul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 44 Points Pops Wynn (6/21/2013 7:48:00 AM)

    It's very beautiful beyong explanation, and fittingly fixed with the beginning at the end, focused well. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (6/21/2013 6:11:00 AM)

    Beautiful imagery has been embellished by endearing smith flow of rhythm & rhyme, use of diction is fabulous...especially written with the warmth of emotions, indeeed romantic poem.. (Report) Reply

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