Bri Edwards

Gold Star - 8,548 Points (some time ago / Earth, i believe)

With..... [with This And With That; A Poem Written 'By Mistake'] - Poem by Bri Edwards

“Accompanied by”, “joined to”, “in addition to “: these “WITH” does mean.
Chocolate layer cake WITH ice cream (flavored by vanilla bean):
she came down WITH a cold; at least that’s what she told her boss;
a roasted duck breast WITH potatoes and orange or cherry sauce.

I meant to write about “WHITE”, but I wrote “WITH” by mistake.
Golden french fries WITH catsup, WITH strawberry milkshake;
I like when she is WITH me, in our comfy bed at night;
warm apple pie, WITH a slice of cheese, right now sounds awfully right.

I could go on and on WITH “WITH-lines' to keep from being bored.
Her mind was filled WITH a morbid thought before she pulled ripcord;
you may be shocked the previous line is WITHout a reference to food;
if you think that I’m so regimented, then I think you’re rather rude.

(11-26-2010)


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i hope you enjoy. no explanation needed.

Comments about With..... [with This And With That; A Poem Written 'By Mistake'] by Bri Edwards

  • Rookie - 361 Points Shania K. Younce (3/29/2014 12:25:00 AM)

    This is a very good mistake. The poem sort of made me laugh and smile. I really like it. Bien! (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 614 Points Elena Plotkin (8/27/2013 4:46:00 PM)

    I whole-heartedly agree with Charles Darnell. A enjoyable read had me smiling to the very end. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Charles Darnell (7/5/2013 10:23:00 AM)

    This was fun. You are a poet WITH a delicious sense of humor. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 30, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013


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