With Self Admission Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With Self Admission

Rating: 5.0


Smile differs
With something to offer
To avert war
If so then smile like star

One smile may alter scene
Woman may be waiting for it to be seen
Mother may be so desperate to see it from son
Every smile has got noble reason

Smile sends signal
To remind you of its arrival
With happiness and joy
You have to seize it and enjoy

It is free
To feel under tree
With its coolness
Some shine may rush on face

Smile should not go in waste
It has its own test
To make your life as hell
Sarcastic smile has everything to tell

You try to know its worth
Old man realizes it at the time of death
When he has before him all members
To bid good bye and remember

That brings happy smile
In its own style
As if fulfillment of life’s mission
It is acknowledged with self admission

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Smile differs With something to offer To avert war If so then smile like star

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Wonderful review of something we all do Jeff Phillips3 days ago This poem described the smile well in it's many facets. What I would humbly suggest is to have the words, phrases and thoughts flow, unless you were trying to achieve a more staccato form of writing. Comment +1

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U Aung Myint very good indeed.

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prasad bolimeru nice williams Prince nice

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Promila Sharma Awesome

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» U Aung Myint very good indeed. Some Girl Yes a smile is infectious, smile and you will continue to smile :)

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20 hours ago Elzbieta Kry.. very.... nice.... dziekuje.... Sana Shahid Very nice poem! ! ! thank you! ! ! ANALIA PALEST.. Thanks, dear friend

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DEVKISHAN MEH.. Smile is free To feel under tree With its coolness Some shine may rush on face

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» Vanisha.... the Smile should not go in waste.. Sarcastic smile has everything to tell Old man realizes it at the time of death It is acknowledged with self admission.. so then smile like star

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Tanvi, That brings happy smile In its own style As if fulfillment of life’s mission It is acknowledged with self admission

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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