With Improvement Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With Improvement

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With improvement

We were in prime stage
But passed through ages
And developed into well being
With improvement in living

The need was felt
The fragrance was smelt
Great many people took birth on this land
People lived in good atmosphere and as friend

The spirituality gained ground
The new hope too was found
The sages and preachers professed tolerance
'Love and not the hate' was maintained with acceptance

Many civilizations were developed
The rivalry and bloodshed was stopped
Many kingdoms came up on surface
With people came to be known as races

We remember them from time to time
Celebrate their anniversaries on divine lines
Adopt some of the teachings and propagate
We have now lot more to accept

We need to develop more on modern pattern
Where all races should learn to live
Coexistence and adopt peaceful environment
To make earth as lovely as possible in its present form

With Improvement
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Ratnakar Mandlik 11 February 2016

We need to develop more on modern pattern Where all races should lean to live Coexistence and adopt peaceful environment To make earth as lovely as possible in it, s present form. Amazing thoughts stressing the need for peaceful coexistence of all races of human beings. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 11 February 2016

We need to develop more on modern pattern Where all races should learn to live Coexistence and adopt peaceful environment To make earth as lovely as possible in its present form

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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