With Hard Work Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With Hard Work

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It is me alone
To identify as one
Even though surrounded by many
Yet it is to be realized fully

You may meet success
With full access
And determination
Still more efforts needed for action

Think of primary goal
Think respond to call
You are in mid way
The aim should not be washed away

No one may come to guide
You only have to decide
If you are believer in good faith
You shall have peace with easy breath

The wealth accumulation is no success
If poor are unhappy with your chase
Take steps to see no one is troubled
Your nobility must reign as you have struggled

Earn more but with hard work
Spend too with smiling face and words
That may give you mental peace
Life may be spent at ease

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

Hard work Marian MLess than a minute ago Life itself is a hard work if we really get into it but the perception how we see it that makes a difference, a poem like this reminds us on it. Comment +1 interesting

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

Tammy Tadlock2 hours ago good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

very good Adam Rollins2 hours ago You are the only one who can accomplish everything you want to get done in life. Keep on pursuing your dreams no matter what the hurdles are put in your way Comment +1 nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

very good Adam Crowder2 hours ago Very good advice as well... Stick through your goals and take satisfaction over wealth Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

Ashlee Starbuck2 hours ago good message

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2013

Options Maricela Ramírez 8 hours ago · Excelente See Translation

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2013

welcome Sadiqullah Khan like this. a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 06 November 2013

Deleteunknownworld I like, your words moved me thank you

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

A poem with inner sense. Amir Samji2 hours ago It is true; you earn with your hard efforts but don't let it accumulate; spare some of it for others who may don't have seen such beauty of life, as you said; 'The wealth accumulation is no success' what a powerful expression. I love it. Comment +1 Well written, an excellent poem

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 November 2013

stan brierly2 hours ago I love your words and conclusion about life Comment +1 good

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