~~with Each Breath I Inhale The Entire Universe Poem by Chuy Amante

~~with Each Breath I Inhale The Entire Universe

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With each breath I take in the whole Universe
When I exhale, it all again rebirths

It is what I think
It's not what I don't

The question is will I will or will I won't

Let it all exist it will anyway
Let go of rules
that keep you in the way

All is, it cannot cannot be

Let all thoughts drift~~~
out to sea~~~ see

Endless birthing in eternity?

Monday, June 16, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
INspired by a meditation done by Robert Adams
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bharati Nayak 12 December 2016

With each breath I take in the whole Universe When I exhale, it all again rebirths It is what I think It's not what I don't - - - - - - - - - - A wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.We find our world through our own perception.

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Margaret Alice Second 18 October 2014

Everything is siphoned through our individual consciousness and everything is unique thus we each live in a unique universe as the way you hear a bird sing is unique and thus YOU create it in our intersubjective universe. I love your subjects, great for poetry!

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F J Thomas 23 July 2014

Not bad for a 99yr old....articulating quite well with age I see 8) I still enjoy the peace within your messages... though I'm sure you have some that may have a little bite to them. Not trying to get my 'socks knocked off; ' yes iiiyyyy wear socks! lol

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Colleen Courtney 16 June 2014

It is what I think, it's not what I don't. Means a lot when looking at it from the stance of inhaling the whole universe! Nicely done!

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