With Comments Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

With Comments

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With comments

My love smiles
In a style
Variant with time
I miss it more sometimes

It is her habit
To greet
With mild attack
And gently stake

Such a good character
But she is not an actor
She is good mother and lover
What can I offer?

Life is like vast field
Where different positions are held
Everybody moves in orderly manner
To remain as good lover, bad teaser

I shall prefer to be different
With more prone to an attachment
Take every chance to present
And lively send with comments

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Tuesday, November 24, 2015
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 November 2015

I shall prefer to be different With more prone to an attachment Take every chance to present And lively send with comments

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 November 2015

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 November 2015

welcome udi Satyavenkatavinodkumar and Poetry Land like this. Unlike · Reply · 1 · Just now

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Ratnakar Mandlik 24 November 2015

Beautiful poem presenting one's approach towards relations and emotions. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 November 2015

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 November 2015

Alexandra Rodrigues thank you for the poetic comment to y write. Unlike · Reply · 1 · 2 hrs 14 minutes ago

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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