Amy De guzman

With And Without - Poem by Amy De guzman

Absence of stars
an inky night
a rhymeless poem
a placeless time
a moment without you.

The darkness fades
dawn appears
a beam of light
your presence at hand
an eternal joy.


Comments about With And Without by Amy De guzman

  • Gold Star - 10,193 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/30/2013 12:25:00 AM)

    The difference between with and without 'You has been vividly portrayed. Well done. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 841 Points Ency Bearis (8/29/2013 6:50:00 AM)

    I like the brevity, meaningful (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,046 Points Dave Walker (8/27/2013 8:14:00 AM)

    A great flowing poem, like it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 27, 2013

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 29, 2013

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