With And Without Poem by Amy De guzman

With And Without

Rating: 4.5


Absence of stars
an inky night
a rhymeless poem
a placeless time
a moment without you.

The darkness fades
dawn appears
a beam of light
your presence at hand
an eternal joy.

amyb

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 30 August 2013

The difference between with and without 'You has been vividly portrayed. Well done.

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Ency Bearis 29 August 2013

I like the brevity, meaningful

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Dave Walker 27 August 2013

A great flowing poem, like it.

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