Wisdom Of A Broken Heart67 Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Wisdom Of A Broken Heart67

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our love became mechanical,
are transmitter fell to the ground,
the kisses turned to concrete, and
the hugs turned to steel, the moment
filled with money, the laughter filled
with spite, and a moment of silence,
for a love thats about to die...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Root 19 July 2006

Hi David, It's very true, It is hard to be in a relationship. It takes a lot of work trust, honesty, sincerity and love. This is something I thing most relationships are lacking. No one seems to be together and after a certain age we become wary. Excellent poem, Great vivid imagery and emotions. Take care.

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A Harrie 25 August 2005

superb use of descriptive words, much enjoyed.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 16 August 2005

Invest in EverReady Batteries. It will perk new life into this 'lifeless' charade! LSP

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