Wisdom Poem by Suresh Dogra

Wisdom

Rating: 3.5


Science and arts
Play their parts
well in life
Money matters
To keep alive
Sympathy
Compassion
Add some love
And you have
All you need
The rest is
So much trash
Wastage of time
A load on heart

Wednesday, November 12, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Eric Ericson 12 November 2014

this is very good. I think the only thing I would change in this poem is the first two lines rhyme while none of the rest do. I think you should consider making everything rhyme or no rhymes at all. To me the second line feels cliche'.

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