Winter Night Poem by suriamurthy vekneswaramurthy

Winter Night

Rating: 4.7


Look........
The gleaming white snow covered yhe ground,
Star sparkled in crisp,
Crystal Snowfakles,
All over trees and mountain,

Listen.........
The falling of the white snow,
Brought the street to become colder,
No sound could be hear,
No light was shining,
Like the street was haunted,

The slow movement of people,
Makes me to think about ghost,
With white dress and sharp teeth,
Made me to afraid and scared,
But winter is always special.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Manonton Dalan 20 September 2008

go outside and be a ghost and shiver to unforgiving cold. md. lovely poem

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Ashraful Musaddeq 13 September 2008

'The slow movement of people, Makes me to think about ghost, With white dress and sharp teeth, Made me to afraid and scared, But winter is always special.' O how nice is the last stanza, beauatiful imagery.

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Joseph Poewhit 09 September 2008

I like those last few lines - great

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 September 2008

your winter landscapes descriptions could have been improvised...........better and make it shivers right to the spines butta, a virgin piece is always nice n sweet.keep writing bro.! ! ! A+ and 10

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