Winter Jasmine Poem by Cherry Zhai

Winter Jasmine

Rating: 5.0


As every year
I see you again
It’s so cold, but you have already blossomed.
Why are you so impatient to come into bloom before the other flowers?
You are the flower touching me the most
How bright is your color!
Like the dazzling sunlight,
Gives us vigor,
Little yellow flowers,
Messenger of spring.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Don Mcwilliams 10 April 2008

Very beautiful, Cherry. I can't wait to see more. Don

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 10 April 2008

beautiful spring poem! thanks for sharing :)

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Luis Gil 10 April 2008

The first flowers are the bravest, they are exposed and can freeze..... Maybe, that´s why they are the most beautiful. Take care.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 11 April 2008

how i wish i was the flower of your elaborations and admirations.........what a lovely pioneer piece, full of questionable meanings..............your first is a 10 love, sulaiman

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Abdelmajid Seghir 11 April 2008

lucky flower! ! i can see your love for it! lol take care

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 October 2008

A cute poem on Jesmine. 10 from me.

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Manonton Dalan 17 September 2008

hurry not thy flower bloom for they have life of their own and when they come in hurry will wilt sooner on a day sinsi.md

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Aseso Omollo 12 April 2008

Jasmine, Great first piece, would like to see some more

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William Jackson 12 April 2008

Cherry, I love the scent of Jasmine and the vividness of it's exquisitely delicate flowers; you have beautifully and poetically expressed your sense of mystery and wonder for this Winter harbinger of spring. Excellent write!

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Malini Kadir 12 April 2008

Nice use of metaphor......keep writing! All the best to you...in all your en devours

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