Winter Has Turned In Japan Poem by wabi sabi

Winter Has Turned In Japan

Rating: 5.0


Closet/beginning to feel winter clothes heavy
Train/went out to find out spring
Lake/some boats floating empty
Jizo Statue/covered with moss in vividly deep green
Roofs/in the morning light
Benches/people lunching
Cafe/sunset seen between the blinds
Stationary/my niece starting elementary
Frog/as green as cabbage
Station/an elder lady in a baby pink dress
Sofa/kitty yawning on my chest with me
Boyfriend/here to amend over the fight last night


The day light has begun to give off something new.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Karen Deeks 10 March 2012

Wonderful snapshots of micro observations. I particularly liked the reference to a previous nights fight as it seems to suggest part of lifes cycle... Karen

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Elena Sandu 04 February 2012

This is a lovely write dear friend, your insights are beautiful, inconveniet things are mentioned in such a kind manner with a great charm. I enjoyed this beaty, thank you for share.

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Ramesh Rai 01 February 2012

your every day should begin with a new, nice poem, liked it.

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