Wings Of Time Poem by Aftab Alam

Wings Of Time

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O the bell of time,
I love thy chime,
For if ears power die

O the bird of time,
Singeth with rhyme,
Full throated above high,

O the mind of mine,
Put me on the wings of time,
I too wish to touch the sky,



©2014 Aftab Alam Khursheed. All rights reserved

Tuesday, November 11, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: time
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 11 November 2014

I too wish to touch the sky, I am the sky, see Aftabji.

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Sandra Feldman 11 November 2014

The presentation of the movement of time and Time with wings, yes time flies, is the best I have read. Beautifully and so poetically set.

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Heather Wilkins 11 November 2014

time goes too quickly it seems to have wings and fly away lovely writing

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Ramesh Rai 13 November 2014

Beautiful touch with wings of rhyme

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 13 November 2014

Put me on the wings of time, I too wish to touch the sky, A poem of feelings and sentiments where poet has the wish to be too high to touch the sky. Well written.I enjoyed it Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Mohammad Skati 12 November 2014

Time is strong, but we can benefit from it. Thanks.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 12 November 2014

O the mind of mine, Put me on the wings of time, I too wish to touch the sky, .....very touching lines.....very well composed indeed

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Salini Nair 11 November 2014

O the mind of mine, Put me on the wings of time, I too wish to touch the sky, .................................to travel with time....beautiful

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