Claire Chambers

Rookie (Bedford)

Wings Of A Butterfly - Poem by Claire Chambers

Will you even notice when I'm gone?
The space no longer occupied by me
My existence fragments of a broken memory within your mind
And my hunger for you will go unfed

I am no longer there
I am a trapped butterfly that has broken free
And yet wherever I go, you are haunting me
I am damaged: my wings have been broken
You are crushing the butterfly that has been given to you

However loud I scream, you don't hear me
You have turned your back
When I am no longer here, you will mourn your love for me
Or will you even notice I'm gone?

Comments about Wings Of A Butterfly by Claire Chambers

  • Silver Star - 3,219 Points Babatunde Aremu (11/13/2015 7:20:00 AM)

    Great use of imagery. The poem is emotion- laden. A great way for poets to pour their 'sicknesses'. Good job (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 12,021 Points Anil Kumar Panda (11/13/2015 1:10:00 AM)

    There is a sadness in the poem that touches the heart. Very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Linda Preston (4/1/2005 3:01:00 PM)

    nice metaphor - certainly conveys a feeling of pain. Nice one. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 1, 2005

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