Wineglass Saturday Night Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Wineglass Saturday Night

Rating: 5.0


Wineglass Saturday night is sweet
Worshiping all the girls
Who throw back their hair and laugh
When they notice my lonely gaze.

My life is Sunday morning strawberry jam
Smiling at the morning news,
Not letting any current currency of despair
Bankrupt my bountiful spirits.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dee Daffodil 09 February 2007

Hmm....strangely...I can identify with this poem! Hugs, Dee

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Sandra Fowler 30 January 2007

You are always so genuine. You handle contrasting moods here with fine creative skill. Ten without hesitation. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Ernestine Northover 28 January 2007

Sounds like that wine is pretty strong Uriah. Sounds good though! I do love strawberry jam too. A pleasure to read this one. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 28 January 2007

A WORK AS DIFFERENT AS NIGHT & DAY, LITERARILY! A fine penning, Uriah...Anew day brings new hope & opportunity for finer wine! F.J.R.

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Alison Cassidy 27 January 2007

A poem of contrasts - two contrasting pictures - softly spoken verse. love, Allie xxxx

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