Window On The World Poem by Dr subhendu kar

Window On The World

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As in my absence you left the earthly land
when I was primed with all my earthly sane
when I smiled with joy across your voices cuckoo
As law when truth absolute bound by the Godly frames.

as when your whispers dazzled me across
grief when clasps me as you bade the finale
farewell when ruefully rasping me saddened
heart when remorse by the blood seeming white

rose when frosted and wind when chilled
yet the sorrow contradicts the faith of love
truth of love when belied by the belief in trust
clouds when shadowed by the warmth of sun

moons when refluxing upon by the dew of the earth
as you mingled into the dusts ultimate divine
still I hear your voices melodious in my ear
yet it reverberates as if the bloods to tear

yet I didn’t see your rave up on shore in repose
but I do embrace the sands melting you above
as I blaze the tribute to your soul eternal
your semblance being cradled by blissful swings

blessing when ordained by the heavenly desire
as your love was true to your words sanguine
even all odds and oddities resourced against your will
as your belief of faith braced up by the truth absolute

and you simply disappeared by His trust in truth
when I opened my window on the world

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tiffanie Lau 24 February 2008

a truly awesome write. glad i didn't miss this one. thanks for sharing!

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Meggie Gultiano 24 February 2008

I was touched by the last two lines here, Dr..and you simply disappeared by His trust in truth, when i opened my window on the world.. i think there was still a disbelief in a disappearing loved one, or a hold on in your heart, still not accepting that that person is gone already. this line, WHEN I OPEN THE WINDOW ON THE WORLD...are your expectations for something unfinished desire of your heart, or any thing you wanted to convey....A wonderful masterpiece of yours and i am glad i happened to pass by here in your sight.. Love, Meggie

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Thad Wilk 24 February 2008

What a beautiful tribute to Mary Wismer Dr. Kar! To her soul eternal. She will always be remembered by all! ! A wonderful lady! Best Regards, Friend Thad

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Broken Peaces 24 February 2008

A beautiful write Dr. written in the words of true friendship thanks for sharing High regards Chris 10

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Melvina Germain 24 February 2008

I didn't have the opportunity to get to know this wonderful lady 'Mary Wismer', having said that after reading your most eloquent tribute to your dear friend Mary, I can see that she was truly a special person and loved and respected by her peers. Your poem is exquisite, truly beautiful and heartfelt. Melvina

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Tsira Goge 06 March 2008

Very touching and it is close, as a related soul... 10.......... Tsira

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Anjali Mandokhot 29 February 2008

yet I didn’t see your rave up on shore in repose but I do embrace the sands melting you above as I blaze the tribute to your soul eternal your semblance being cradled by blissful swings....... lovely and inexplicably beautiful.....so full of imagery and emotions wishes anjali

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Patrice James 28 February 2008

very heartfelt work dr. thanks for sharing.......................

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Jing Jing 26 February 2008

this is very sad and full of emotional write, i could truly feel your hurt.....once again well penned.

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good bye 25 February 2008

Dr. this is a very beautiful tribute to my mum, and i am much more hurt to loss my mum, but you see life must go on, and as my mum wish us to be..dont be sad cause she is by us....i love this one dr. its so beautiful write. Micah

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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