Wind ***** Wind Combs My Hair Poem by Rommel Mark Dominguez Marchan

Wind ***** Wind Combs My Hair

Rating: 4.6


(written in Palilan river, Palilan Jimenez, Mis. Occ.'Philippines
just a 10 m.. away from my home.A river is located at the back my
elem. grade school and to where i spent my concised childhood
moments, leisure times, chanting with friends, swimming, collecting shells, diving,
and escaping from 'undefined responsibilities'..........

A sentimental wind
follows down river;
bands of finger
brush the long column
of nipa leaves

whispering among
long-legged roots
of mangrove trees

Combing out my hair
in thrilling touch
Pulling out all wrinkles
of fears
in facing of my shadowy
future

and the wind dries up
all my tears

and the sole river remains
the mute witness forever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laura Lloyd 13 July 2009

the title is a bit weard but you seee why he said it but overall its quite good but i wouldent recomend it!

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beautiful expression from a true poet.. tks for sharing

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Elvira Marchan 25 April 2009

There's no place like a home....we feel its nature in our childhood days..Gone are those days but never in our thoughts and feelings....

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a.k.a. Jetfellow Marchanism
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