Wind And Rain Poem by Sally Plumb Plumb

Wind And Rain

Rating: 5.0


Wind racing, rain facing
glow, an eye stinging,
ear whistling blow,
with mouth gasping,
breath rasping north wind,
force wind, cold source
artic on course wind
for inside out umbrella
pinned fella...

when she turned around
and embarrassedly grinned.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ken E Hall 06 November 2012

Wind and rain poem so so, but the presenting of it is another kettle of fish great, with a delightful ending with a fella in her umbrella...clever women...regards

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Sally P. P. 13 March 2019

Dear Ken, Thankyou for your welcome remarks. Best regards.....Sally

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Ramesh Rai 14 April 2012

i can say with full confidence that u r the gem for poets world

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Sally 15 August 2022

Thanks for your lovely remark, Ramesh

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Danny Draper 02 March 2012

Those darn brollies, inferior quality to not withstand a force 10 gale. Nice poem with interesting rhymes.

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Wahab Abdul 29 February 2012

well described and well captured, a fantastic write really.

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Valerie Dohren 20 February 2012

Another good one Sally - subject matter all too familiar! !

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Sally Plumb Plumb

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Haverhill Suffolk England
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