Willie The Woeful Wall Poem by Natalie Macias

Willie The Woeful Wall



One day his father gone
The next his mother
Paint chips away like memories
One memory was of his brother

He stands still like a statue
Until in creeps night
Trying not to break
But losing the fight

Hes woeful like a still wall
Stands still and likes to pretend
Thats his days are still happy
And this is not the end

Hes a faded bland wall
A sheet of paper never used
A work of art never admired
A broken light never fused

An upside down smile
A colorless wilted flower
Trying to take from, sun and moonlight
To stand, some power..

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Last year my teacher; used to give us topics or poem names to give us inspiration and 'Willie the Woeful Wall' was our topic so this is wat i came up with. Then about a week ago i found these poems and i edited it a little, hope you guys can give me some useful criticism I'd really appreciate it to become a better; thank-you
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Natalie Macias

Natalie Macias

Glendale, California
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