Will You Shake My Hand? Poem by see fee lee

Will You Shake My Hand?



Oh dear are you human?
I must know and have to know
If you are human just like me
My dear human living on mother earth
Dear human being with different races
Different cultures and different religions
Dear me same color with different tongues
Believe cultures foods and celebration
Big and small tall and short
Which make this human being?
Beautifully fellow walks of life
Quality being on mother earth and living
Oh dear are you human
And will you shake my hand?
Mother earth love to see
Dear human hand in hand

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Grace Tan 05 February 2007

Good effort! There's a lot of profound thoughts in it, and I am able to grasp the essence of your poem. I feel that if you can improve on your phrasing and usage of words, you will definately become a poet with banks of lovely poems! You have many ideas and imagery to present to the world, and I wish u all the best, that one day you'll be able to portray these and stun us, with your words. Jia you!

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