Will I Ever Be Loved? Poem by Godspower Oshodin

Will I Ever Be Loved?

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will i ever be loved?
when i have made love go this way
to set lovers in pure dismay
making hearts to go astray
will i ever be loved?

when the signs of love have worked in vain
and slant my heart to future pain
all these are pains again
will i ever be loved?

when i have criticized the ways of my rulers
making them to look like betrayers
with my poetry calling them slayers
will i ever be loved?

when i have made the government to hate me
with their heart, i say it will not be
their ways are not pure i foresee.
will i ever be loved?

when coteries of lovers are sharing kisses
leaving me all alone in my premises
and now i face these nemesis.
will i ever be loved?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carol Rhodes 24 July 2008

Yes, Godspower, you shall be loved and are loved. You are special and much time is with you. Biggest job is loving ourselves, knowing ourselves so that we can love without limitations and unrealistic expectations, yes? Once you are complete, like yourself, enjoy yourself, then you can share wholely, harmoniously with passion and true sweet binding affection. You will attract a woman of equal maturity and compassion. Freedom, independence within a trusting loving union is the love of a lifetime, in my not so humble opinion. You are way ahead of the game. Love will stand beside you soon...Such a pleasure to know you! ! ! Carol (Hughes) Rhodes (Yoonoos Peerbocus is one of my favorites.)

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Shannon ... 10 February 2009

Great poem! ! everyone has a soul mate, you will find yous.10

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Jolenish Fiber 04 December 2008

i read this many months ago, and then we fell out of touch for a while. this is more beautiful the second time i read it.... i love you.... does that count?

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Linda Moore 19 November 2008

I am sure you are and will be Loved.........10 very nice, sensitive and questioning

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Obed Akuma 28 August 2008

WE choose to love or to be loved. Nice wondering though. Keep it up.

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Jolenish Fiber 29 July 2008

it is the greatest thing to love freely and wholly with no qualms from the person you give this love to, and getting that same kind of unrefrained love back...

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Godspower Oshodin

Godspower Oshodin

Lagos Nigeria
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