Wild Romance Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

Wild Romance



Don't think I am a laughing-stock
I will make tonight an epoch
Baby all my limbs want to talk
I want to rock you like hard rock
We are two birds that make a flock
I am tick tock you are the clock
On your heart's door I want to knock
Though I have the key of its lock
You are blackboard my tongue is chalk
I want to kiss you like peacock
And hug you like electric shock
You are my prey I am a hawk

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paddy Jansen 20 November 2012

well done m8 nice rhyming

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So Close 20 November 2012

its something different and the words are excellent We are two birds that make a flock I am tick tock you are the clock On your heart's door I want to knock was superb »so close«

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Hazel Durham 20 November 2012

Loved it, with amazing lines, so original, inspired write! !

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Sahil Sood 20 November 2012

luvd reading it..! !

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Valsa George 20 November 2012

The sound effect makes it an enjoyable read! !

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Cierrah Smiles 01 December 2012

i like this poem. i also like the rhyme :)

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Marium Fatima 26 November 2012

Excellet...! The rhyme is great.. tbh its an owsum one.. ;) keep it up.. (Y)

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Murasaki Kitsune 22 November 2012

this is wonderful, i love the rhyme sceem, the metaphors and similies are very vivid, kep it up man

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Angel Lockwood 22 November 2012

Alright! Expressive, I had to gasp :) Really enjoyed it A man expressing romance, really nice

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 November 2012

Woah real wild eh! Electric currents of love do electric shock hee hee. Fun poem with an excellent flow.

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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