Wild Flower Poem by lady grace

Wild Flower

Rating: 5.0


A simple girl she was
a simple woman she’ll be
lives in her simplest dream
future... God makes her free...

like a flower produces nectar
not to attract but to feed
bees.. butterflies and other insects
pollinate to produce nicer breeds..

in a forest where a monster lives
dark cold nights he suffers most
like a butterfly he wanted to see
a honey that moist's lips of a soldier bee…

by curiosity he went on
to the garden of no return
a pitcher plant he meets
she bites, she kills...she sleeps….


© 2009 lady grace (All rights reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subroto Chatterjee 23 July 2009

A wild flower....a pitcher plant...venus fly-trap? Now, a honey-trap.. Cheers. Subroto

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Deborah Cromer 23 July 2009

Very creative and naturally deadly. Nicely arranged by thought. DC

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Joseph Poewhit 23 July 2009

The last line is very -----? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

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Rafique Farooqi 23 July 2009

Very decent poem.....well written

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Alf Hutchison 23 July 2009

Naughty monster! ! well done grace regards Alf

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Eyan Desir 26 April 2010

haha u and your poems.......

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Melissa Smith 01 August 2009

Nice choice of words and intense flow. LOVED it! ! 10+!

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Antonio Liao 29 July 2009

your great poet...my salute and vow of respect in the poem you share for the society of poet...a poem of reality......everything ends to begin again like a wild flower......the last line could be the last defense....i like it best...God bless...a 10 +++++

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Melvin Banggollay 27 July 2009

wala akong masabni kundi maganda at nakaka-inlove ang yong tula. I love you, melvin

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Noel Horlanda 25 July 2009

This piece of work is lovely indeed, supposed to be wild but not literally, the creature was so very sweet indeed, sweet as a nectar. This also proved that the author is also so sweet as a wild flower like the lady in waiting. And with a feminine touch that is...

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