Wife To Husband Poem by prapti choudhary

Wife To Husband



you seem so tired
you seem so exhausted
your not wanting steps
are clearly visible,
it makes me realize
things are not right
in our beautiful relationship;
your stupid'talks
your nonstop' songs
your gesture of love'
your kiss
your hugs-
were appreciated every time
it makes me smile;
my mood swings to right
honey! what has changed you and your mind?
honey! why you have become so quiet?

Tuesday, October 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love,realistic,relationships
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Liza Sudina 13 October 2015

may be he needs some time to relax? poem full of care! nice!

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Kishore Kumar Das 24 March 2016

sometimes it happens...till a trigger is there... nice poem..

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Rishi Thakkar 08 January 2016

Lovely relatable well penned :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 03 November 2015

It makes you to smile for a while when stupid talks take place as you try to chase joy you are so happy when he is already with you to pass through all happy moments

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Gajanan Mishra 31 October 2015

nothing is right, but we should keep our thought in right.. go on. keep poetic relation. Leave not poetry at any time..

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Vishal Sharma 14 October 2015

nicely penned poetry i like it

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