Wicked Love Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness

The poem really spins with a turbulent forces of a vexatious conundrum. In any case, to deflect any awkwardness on my part, I see you perceive the moral ramifications: where’s the free will for this uncomfortable predicament? It's as if to say: Who is the real me (anyhow) ? ....or is this just a case of latent insecurities gone bad? -whatever you want to call it-the words have a ripe, challenging proposition of how considered romantic adventures might explain inappropriate behavior.

it was b'z it was meant to... nothing can dig a hole in quicksand.... let it be... just let it be... its happened in every life.. once.. if not pray for it to happen.....! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! this is what poems are written about... why regret...a thing of pure divine beauty... love...! !

this is an amazing work of art...I love the last four lines...fantastic poem.

This poem had lots of excellent imagery and wordplay. There were a few occasions, however, where I thought some revision was needed (in some cases it felt like words were missing) . I liked it a lot. Please read some of my poems if you have the time. Thanks!

wow - you and i both on 9... fate... cloud 9 coming for us both... hang in there as will i too... your writing is good, very very good - I enjoyed reading all. Thank you X

You writing just flows like a beautiful river.

Love the word use in this poem, its an odd(in a brilliant way) poem, extrodinary approach at wording thoughts, Fairplay!

i like it alot, its as if the women is seducing this man unintentionally and hes falling in love with her. Good :)

i like the passion in your words, your theme- very sad, and truthful. lungelo

blue bear, just glitter- eternally