Stella Nicole Gopal

Rookie (02/07/1996 / Harare)

Why You - Poem by Stella Nicole Gopal

I am sorry that,
i ever fell for you,
this emotional attachment,
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Comments about Why You by Stella Nicole Gopal

  • Rookie - 21 Points Tallulah Montegue (7/2/2014 8:13:00 PM)

    'my heart's funeral, I carry this coffin, it lies still loving you. Wow. Beautiful, sad, lonely. how do I dry my eyes. Gawd, yes, how? Keep writing until all the feelings have left. Just wonderful, would love the words to stay in my brain so I can say them over and over. So poetic (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 37 Points Colleen Courtney (7/2/2014 10:58:00 AM)

    Can definitely feel all those mixed up and crazy emotions come through! Love how they come straight from the heart. As if you just sat down and wrote out everything this person makes you feel. Well done! An honest write! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 940 Points Leslie Philibert (7/2/2014 2:42:00 AM)

    Nice job...the title needs a qustion mark, and, please can`t not cant! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Oscar Robles (7/2/2013 4:18:00 PM)

    Very very nice! ! ! I feel the words you write. Take time to read some of mine. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Candis Johnson (7/2/2013 2:52:00 PM)

    I like this! Good work! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,453 Points Khairul Ahsan (7/2/2013 10:33:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem. For a while thought you were talking to me! Love you! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ganesh U (7/2/2013 2:26:00 AM)

    wonderful poem, |*tears while reading*| (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Wes Mbanje (7/6/2012 3:50:00 AM)

    i can relate, i cant escape (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alla Simone (7/3/2012 12:02:00 PM)

    This poems rythm is soothing yet melancholy and I loved your clear imagery. Now I just can't let go, and it just hurts, my hearts funeral. Also, I found that was is lost, but is still there to be a very clever line. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,698 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (7/3/2012 12:15:00 AM)

    wish it was someone else,
    just not you...! ! ! !
    The person in this poem has come to her senses and at last decides something that is very useful for her in future, instead of fighting for the same man and his attention day and night through out her life. Girls, When we have the opportunity to have a person for our own use, why do, a few of you, go after another person's boyfriend or a husband? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 182 Points Karen Sinclair (7/2/2012 6:05:00 PM)

    Dear lady i live with this daily too.. perhaps its not them perhaps its just us disliking that we are committed and wishing to sever the ties through fear of things crashing....i love this write as through my version of events and life i totally understand this... tyvm karen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Terence George Craddock (7/2/2012 3:25:00 PM)

    Beautifully written and a unique metaphor, a forbidden love, 'my hearts funeral, / i carry this coffin, it lies still loving you, ' is quite wonderful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mien Bless (7/2/2012 12:40:00 AM)

    lovely poem indeed.... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,658 Points Godfrey Morris (6/20/2012 7:18:00 PM)

    Another lovely poem....... (Report) Reply










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