Why To Blame Someone In Love Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Why To Blame Someone In Love

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No shame for him,
no blame for him,
no name for him,
no tame for him,
no fame for him,
no game for him,
he is insane in love.
Is he a dove?
Don’t shoot this bird he is blindfold,
see how much he is brave and bold!
Or he is a dirty dog?
Who can see in dark and fog!
He has put his head on the feet,
He is happy in her treat,
He likes her sweat,
His beloved is unseen!
He is insane in a preen,
Yes, he cannot see her face,
But he can feel her endless grace.
He couldn’t find her real feet,
but found her in a virtual meet,
let him lick her feet,
for him it’s nice and neat!

Thursday, September 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 04 November 2017

In dark and fog! Thanks for sharing.

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Chinedu Dike 11 March 2016

An insightful depiction of the mighty effects of love - a spiritual experience in which one has little or no powers of deviation, insightfully written with conviction. Lovely poem nicely penned in good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing Akhtar. Please read my poem COLOSSAL MISCARRIAGE OF JUSTICE.

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Khalid Saifullah 03 September 2015

A wonderful poem, when one becomes insane in love, he should not be blamed for anything..............10

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G. Kane 03 September 2015

Solely by coincidence, I present to you the following lines Out, onto love’s hues Oh love, of loving actions by men sovereign, put into symbolism, by men grown of loving, love on worldly placards, people to see, framed love concepts, people's wonder. From the line, D. Ellymeu

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